I've been thinking a lot lately about the phenomena of character whumpage, as you can probably tell from the frequent posts re: the Magnificent Seven. Yesterday I read a comment that suddenly made a lot of things clear for me.
First, I want to clarify the definition of 'whump' for this particularly post: 'whump' is when a character (though no fault of his own, for he is a veritable saint) is treated in a shabby manner by his mistrustful peers until he goes through a grueling, near-fatal ordeal (during which he knows his faithless friends will never go to any effort to safe him, because they just don't care enough) and thus gains the esteem and trust of his so-called friends who are horrified and contrite at their previous behavior. This is very popular in a lot of fandoms, but especially in the Magnificent Seven fandom (poor, put-upon Ezra).
I want to add that not all hurt/comfort fic qualifies as whump by the above definition: Queens of the Wild Frontier is not whump, though there is definitely a focus on hurt (Ezra is still the punching bag), because the story is about Ezra and Buck being in a bad situation and having to get out of it. Neither one is an outcast among his peers and both are capable, fully-developed characters. The Amazon Series, on the other hand, is totally whumpage -- over the course of the first three stories, Ezra is repeatedly beaten, shot multiple times, starved, concussed, abandoned, thrown off a cliff, and set on fire. During this time, most of the remaining six (but especially Nathan) spend lots of time thinking about how unreliable Ezra is because he keeps not showing up for his patrols.
Needless to say, The Amazon Series is vastly more popular in the fandom than Queens of the Wild Frontier.
So, what is the appeal of whump? Yesterday I read something on fandomwank that sounds pretty spot-on. The post was about an author who chose to leave fandom and most of the discussion in the comments were about the nature of her work, much of which involved whumpage. One commentor said (paraphrased, since I just spent the last 45 minutes going through several hundred comments and can't find the darn thing again):
She, like a lot of fanfic authors, is playing out her teenage suicide fantasy in her fanfic: i.e., My parents/friends/boyfriend is being mean, but I'll be hurt/maimed/killed and then they'll be SOOOO sorry! That'll show them!
After thinking about that comment for a while, I realised that it is right on the mark. Most whump fic is just like most teenage suicide/revenge fantasies: emotionally overwrought, featuring a main character who is totally right but terribly misunderstood, and who gains his validation through horrible trauma that makes everyone realize what a wonderful person he is. Thus a happy ending all around! Until next time, because these fics are apparently addictive (once you've started showing all of those evil non-Ezra seven how mean they are, it's impossible to stop).
At this point, I'd planned to explain exactly why I don't like this particular form of whumpage, but I figured no one here is interested in reading about my own teenage angst years. Suffice to say that I personally don't find characters who have no internalized sense of self-worth to be particularly satisfying, and I especially don't like seeing such a person (basically the fanfic version of a puppy) get kicked over and over and over and over again until he's nothing more than a fur sack filled with puppy mush (though, of course he'll survive, because otherwise the characters can't tell him how sorry they are). Frankly, I don't consider these types of stories to be happy ones -- the only true happy ending when a character is being treated this badly by his 'friends' is for him to leave town and go find some new friends, ones who aren't emotionally (and sometimes physically) abusive.
Of course, I seem to be in the minority on this particular topic. At least I've learned one thing -- I will be approaching Magnificent Seven fics with *extreme* caution in the future.
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September 24 2009, 20:13:38 UTC 2 years ago
To me the issue is more of a 'no one loves me, until I'm battered and bruised and then suddenly everyone is soo sorry for how they treated me' one. Sort of like the not-so-good SGA post-Trinity fics, wherein Rodney accepts that he's a worthless piece of shit after Doranda and his team agrees, resulting in Rodney being raped/tortured/abused to make up for the events of the episode. And, of course, when the team finds out, they are soooo sorry.
Honestly, one of the big signs of whumpage seems to be the focus on character remorse at the end, which generally rings false, since these characters clearly are emotionally abusive and will likely to continue to be so since abusers rarely change their ways.
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September 24 2009, 20:33:31 UTC 2 years ago
Well, duh! Because it's Vin who deserves the most whumpage - him being unedumacated and dyslexic and half (or more) breed, and jest plain dum.
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September 24 2009, 20:38:07 UTC 2 years ago
I don't know the Mag 7 fandom at all and it sounds as if I'm doing the right thing by staying out of it. I'd rather have my characters behaving like adults and dealing with real problems than getting involved in playground level hate games. Unfortunately, people who write this kind of thing will always find a ready market for it; there are a lot of very undiscriminating readers about.
September 24 2009, 20:44:09 UTC 2 years ago
And I agree with how immature it reads -- by the time all is said and done, why would you *want* to be friends with these jerks?
(Side note: there is some good M7 fic out there, you just have to look really hard for it -- ER is a pretty good resource if you want to give the fandom a try:)
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September 24 2009, 23:50:51 UTC 2 years ago
Also, I just don't find it particularly satisfying to read teenage angst/revenge fic. It's fine as a fantasy, but it's boring to read in fanfic and shit.
Partly 'cause, y'know, most fandoms don't involve whiny, angsty, boring-as-fuck teenagers.
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September 26 2009, 02:29:35 UTC 2 years ago
I couldn't help noticing the preponderance of fic in which poor Ezra is picked on by stick-up-his-ass Nathan. And I had to ask myself, wow, is it just my imagination or is this, like, kind of racist?
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September 26 2009, 03:25:56 UTC 2 years ago
Here via Metafandom
This is so spot on. I loved whump!fic during my (clinical depression fueled) angst ridden teenage years. As I've gotten therapy, medication, and a more rounded look on life I've found whump!fic to be rather boring and more along the lines of character assassination.Because that's what it is. There's no way to write an in character whump!fic. Either you're doing the whump!character a huge disservice or you're doing it to everyone else in the fic.
So, that's my 2 cents.
September 26 2009, 03:40:28 UTC 2 years ago
Re: Here via Metafandom
If nothing else, a physically whumped character is half-dead at the end of the fic -- it's hard to feel like Rodney's had a happy ending when he's in a coma, or be happy for Ezra when he has multiple bullet holes, broken bones, and massive head trauma (especially since M7 is set in the Old West, where some people died of particularly nasty splinters).September 26 2009, 03:30:58 UTC 2 years ago
For me, "You'll all be sorry" stopped being appealing sometime in early teenagehood, when you begin to realize that, oh, just everybody is so terribly misunderstood *bites fist angstily*
September 26 2009, 03:41:14 UTC 2 years ago
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September 26 2009, 03:59:53 UTC 2 years ago
However, I *do* see why these stories are so popular: because they are *candy*. They are the concentrated essence of a particular feeling. Yes, it's a feeling that is quintessentially 15 years old, but we all still have that 15-y.o. inside us, and sometimes you just want to get in touch with your angsty teenage self and *wallow*. And sometimes you just want to feel sorry for yourself, but in a distanced way. And sometimes you want to have a good cry.
September 26 2009, 04:02:53 UTC 2 years ago
The idea of this made me snicker.
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September 26 2009, 19:49:51 UTC 2 years ago
When did 'whump' become a term of art in fandom?
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September 26 2009, 20:58:11 UTC 2 years ago
KSL's Ezra/Vin fic _Learning to Improvise_ which is a seven very-long-chapters getting together and coming out fic (with bonus shoot-um-outs, broken limbs and other such shenanigans).
While there is mistrust and misjudgement (on Ezra's side as well as well), it's presented in a reasonable fashion.
For example while we see how Nathan's mistrust leads him to believe that Ezra must be planning a con on very little evidence, Nathan isn't reluctant to treat Ezra when he's hurt. There is no concealing wounds, no failure to keep track of people, no miserable ostracization
The only major problem I can see is that the story on her website needs a warning [discussion of pre-fic child abuse including sexual exploitation].
While I think it's written fairly well with the character scarred but not broken, it does have fairly serious ramifications in fic (PTSD not love-life).
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September 26 2009, 21:19:19 UTC 2 years ago
lucky us, 99% of us grew up, and went through the "school of life", and not just did finish highschool ;D
ten years ago, being 20, and just discovered fandom, that kind of trope/theme in fics did attract me too, but really, now ?!?!
being a 30 year old woman, going through all kinds of things in private life and professional job wise, I just can look back, and smile, and think, "and they too, their phase of self pity will pass".
there *is* an audience for that, and they too, will grow up ;D
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